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Dear friends,
Red salutes!
We are happy that
People’s March is coming out regularly. We are reading the magazine.
Occasionally we are translating articles.
We would like to
inform you about our opinions in general about the magazine, as our comrades
suggested:
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Basically I feel there is repetition in the articles.
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The quotations from various newspapers are no doubt necessary.
But I feel so many are not necessary. Giving so many quotations might decrease
analysis and might not fit into the framework of the article.
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Headings could be more attractive.
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Language could be more creative.
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Articles could be shorter, sharper and straighter.
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International issues could be explained in a simpler way in
view of various types of readers.
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I feel that a paragraph with two or three sentences could be given in the
beginning of an article to create interest and take the readers into the
article.
February issue
Coming to the
February issue, these are my observations :
Article on Tsunami
could be supplemented with more photos. How imperialism operates through ‘aid’
could be explained more. Information about GAM developed interest to know more
about it. We hope you could give this information on some or the other occasion.
The article on
reservations in private sector was educative. But I feel our perspective could
be explained in a more detailed manner.
March issue
On the whole the
March issue was interest-ing. But I felt the style of beginning an article and
presenting it could be different and creative depending on the issue.
Revolutionary
greetings
Bharathi
July 15 2005
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